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Garhwali Short Stories
------सैंणुअर डांडु----
Short Story by: Mahesha Nand
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सैंणन् बोलि डांडौ खुंणै ---"हे लोळा डांडा! तु तत्गा ऐंच छै, तौबि मै स्ये तौळ छै। त्वेयी बटि मि जलमू, मै द्येख मि पंगरि(पनपना) ग्यौं। पंगरना बान तु मै स्ये बि बिगळे, पंण तु मोळो सि थुप्ड़ु जख्या-तक्खि छै।"
डांडन् गम्म(गम्भीर) ढौळम् बेलि -- "हे ब्यट्टा सैंणा! चुचा, मि छ त डांडु छौं। दिखेंणौ असमान छौं पंण मि मूसौं कु घत्यंयूं छौं। मि माटू, पांणी, हूंणी-खांणी, घ्यू कि मांणी, सौब धांणि बंणी मूसौं कि डुंड बटि त्वेमी त आंणू छौं। इलै मि लाचार बुबा सि टपरांणू छौं। बिग्यानै सकळि लगौं त जु उंद ग्या, स्यु बौड़ी नि आ।"
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फेसबुक फर लाइक अर कमेंट
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Satirical Story By Mahesha Nand
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रघ्घु दा चौका तिर्वळि ऐ कि गौळु चिरफाड़ी म्यौळंणि घन्नू छौ। गंवड़्या भरि दलगरेंणा(परेसान हूणा) छा वे कS रूंण स्ये। क्वी ब्वन्नु-- "हे वेन रूंण नी त हैंसण च ! वे कु बुबा मुर्यूं च।"
"हे भै, तुम ब्वन्ना त सै बात छंवा पंण सौंण मोरि सासू अर भादौ ऐनि आंसु। मुंड मुंड्ये ग्येनी, तेल खये ग्या, पितरकुड़ु थरप्ये ग्या अर मैना मनSये ग्या त अब म्यौळंणि घन क्यापंणि नि लगंणू च तुम थैं। फूका, वे थैं थामर (सहारा) दींणू वे कS मुक फर एक दां फेर चला।"
सर्रा गौं कS जजड़ाट कै वे कs ड्यारम् ऐ ग्येनि। मंगंणा ब्वाडन् वे कि पीट मलासी बोलि-- "ब्यट्टा! टीग (कमर) मसकांण। कै कs बुबा नि रैनि यीं मुंथम्। सौब आंदा छन अर जांदा छन।"
"ब्वाडा जी, मि जंण्दु छौं।" रघ्घुन् अपड़ु नाक, आंखा अर गिच्चु फूंजी बोलि-- "मै थैं एक मैना ह्वे ग्या, मिन अंमणि फेस बुक खोलि त म्यारा बुबा जी का मुन मा ३०० लुक्खुन् लाइक मारी।" रघ्घु फेर रूंण बैठि ग्या। वेन धौसिनकै बोलि --"जौं लुक्खुन म्यारा बाबै मिरत्यु थैं लाइक कैरि वु म्यारा बैरि छन। खुस ह्वे ग्येनि कि मोरि गि खिम्मा खंणत्वाळ।"
"च्वाबै! त्यारा बुबै मुनै खबर-सार फेसबुक फर कैन सरा ?"
"म्यारा ममा फड़क्वाळ जीन।"
"हेप्डी ब्वे का ! फेसबुका दगड़्यौन् फड़क्वाळ जी कु नौ अर फोटु द्येखि अर फकाफक लाइक मारि द्येनि। फड़क्वाळ जी त भरि फेमस छन फेसबुक मा।" गग्गुन् फेसबुकै सकळि(सच्चै) बिंगा।
"थ्व! कमेंट बि त पौड़ा ज्यां कS सदमा मा रघ्घु भै जिकुड़ु फुंण्णु च।"
रघ्घुन् बोलि-- "कमेंट त् मिन अज्यूं तकै पौढ़ी नि छन।" रघ्घुन कमेंट ओपन कैरि त वु हौर भक्वरा-भकोर कै रूंण बैठि ग्या। फड़क्वाळ जी कु रघ्वा बुबा मुन मा पैलि वूं कि फोटु डळीं अर तौळ बटि ल्यख्यूं छौ-- "म्यारा जीजा जी, सोरग ह्वे ग्येनि।" कमेंट अंया--
"खंणत्वाळ जी! मज्जा मा हैं ?"
"खंणत्वाळ जी, आप जियो हजारों साल।"
"वाह फड़क्वाळ जी! क्या अच्छी खबर दी।"
"गजब फड़क्वाळ जी, दिल खुश कर दिया।"
"आप बहुत अच्छी गडवाली लिखते हैं। लगे रहो फड़क्वाळ जी।"
"सुन्दर कविता फड़क्वाळ जी।"
"गजब फड़क्वाळ जी।"
"छा गये फड़क्वाळ जी।"
"खंणत्वाळ जी अर फड़क्वाळ जी आप हमारा मार्ग-दर्शक छंवा।"
जै कS बिंगण्म ऐ हो, वेन मामला बींगी अर कमेंट कैरि "ओम् शांति ओम्"
हैंकु हौर तुर्रम्म खां वु ल्यखंणू "ओम शांति ओम अच्छी फिल्म है।"


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‘Bargat’: A Garhwali Story raising Hygiene, Health and Superstition issues

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    Analysis of Garhwali short story ‘Bargat’
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                           Review by Bhishma Kukreti

                 ‘Bargat’ is a short story written by Mahesha Nand and is one of stories from story collection ‘Augar’ (2013).
     The story deals with issues of cleanliness, health and exploitation by local remedies doctors (Jhad Tad) 
           The story teller Mahesha Nand illustrates the story with a flow that reader does not leave the story till end gets due surprise from the story narrator.
From the first few lines, Bargat is captivating story.
  Mahesha Nand uses story telling style as he is telling a folk story but with modern subject.
The plot, setting, characterization in the story is praiseworthy
  In many stanzas, the story flow is as poetic flow. There are raptures in a short story and that is the specialty of Mahesha.
  The dialogues are from real Garhwal villages. As is the characteristics of Mahesha Nand the language is Thet Garhwali or could be said unadulterated one from modern education.
         Mahesha Nand is teacher by profession and this author found that he does not mind telling the motivational motto at the end.



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 Danyasti: A Sad Story illustrating children disregarding parents 
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    Analysis of Garhwali short story ‘Bargat’
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                           Review by Bhishma Kukreti

        Danyasti short story by Mahesha Nand is not a new story in Garhwali story world. Past story creators published many stories in Modern Garhwali literature about children ignoring parents in villages or sending back their parents to villages or orphan houses.
 The subject is not new, the plot is also not exclusive and the social conditions are also not new in Danyasti story by Mahesha.
         The present story is important from the point of view of presentation and new phrases used by Mahesha Nand. His phrases in the present story make the story important for Garhwali fiction world.
     Mahesha uses analogies for speeding the story.     
उपरी पंछी तरां टपराणु छौ .
फूलीं मुंडली घांडी सि  लाळ जन डगड्याणि छै  .
धौम्पा कुंलैं कि सि डाली घळकि
   Mahesha Nand is master in using pair words usually used in oral communication in Garhwal and Mahesha uses them as his domesticated slaves. Kathait appreciated his uses of pair words too.
चैल-पैलम , रक्च्वड़ा-रकचोड, अबलाट-छबल़ाट
Mahesha uses words those are not used by educated Garhwali even in Garhwal. Garhwalis should thank Mahesha for making them in uses as
कळयूर, कमताण, रैसान, गासी  .
 Readers would enjoy the sad story as Mahesha is successful in creating pathos.
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Refrence – Augar a Story collection by Mahesha Nnand page 14-20
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 Kutnnyu Chhwara: A Folk Story narrated in new Style
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           There are folk stories those are floating in different localities.  Present story ‘Kutnnyu Chhwara’ by Mahesha Nand looks as folk tale. Mahesha Nand narrated the folk story theme in very modern style.
    Kutin means the woman that beats and thrashes full grains and makes grains for cooking. The story is about a Kutin trapping a fox due to specific reason. The fox obeys her and helps her for her getting fertile field from rich farmer and big house from village chief. Lastly, fox helps her for marrying her son with rich man’s daughter with grace but through fox tricks. Story keeps readers interested in executing actions for strategies by the fox.
 The story is simple and Mahesha Nand narrated the story in his own style. His narration is interesting and reader reads till the end in one sitting. As is his style, Mahesha Nand uses Theth Garhwali words for narrating the story.  Mahesha prefers naming the characters as per their profession.
Overall, the story is interesting.

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Refrence – Augar a Story collection by Mahesha Nnand page 21-27
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 Modern Garhwali Story
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          किरम्वळौं कि भयात
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Story by: Mahesha Nand
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बिंड्डि कै किरम्वळा अपड़ा झिंट्टा-बुकळा लेकि अपड़ा ड्यार छा जांणा। कै मा नाजा भारा त कै मा लखड़्वा गड्वळा छा। हिटद-हिटद सि ऐ ग्येनि एक चौड़ा-चकळा बाठा मा। बाठम् द्वी मनिख लोखरा डिंगुला छा कटंणा। किरम्वळौं कS पदानन् बोलि--- "यूं मनिख्यूं कु बाठु अड्यूं च। न हो कै फर चोट-फटाग लग, पैलि यूं थै जांण द्या। घड़ेक थौ बिसा, पाछ जौला ऐथर।"
सौब किरम्वळा बाठा छोड़ थौ खांण बैठि ग्येनि। एक दानु किरम्वळु मनिख्यूं थै टक्क लगै कि दिखंणू छौ। वेन ज्वान किरम्वळौं थैं अढ़ांद बोलि-- "द्येखा रै छ्वारौं,सि मनिख लोखरा सिनसन् (चिमटा) लोखरा छींणा थै अड्येकि अर तब वे कS बरमंड मा लोखरा कै घैंणन् टमाक मारी लोखरी थैं तड़क्क-तड़क्क तुंण फर लग्यांन्। ग्याड़ु (मूरख) लोखर चड़क्क-चड़क्क टुटंण फर लग्यूं च। ब्वाला, क्य बिंग्यां ?"
"नि बिंग्यां दादा जी, तुमी बिंगा।" ज्वान किरम्वळा दंदोळम् पोड़ि ग्येनि।
"टक्क लगै कि बींगा। जु सि मनिख सूनौ छींणू, सूनौ क्वी घैंण अर सूनौ क्वी सिनसु बणै कि लोखर थैं तुंण चाला त लोखर सप्पा नि टुटंण्या। सूनु चा कतगै मैंगु किलै न धौं, वे फर इतगा सक्या(ताकत) नी कि वु लोखर थैं चड़कै साक। बिंगणै बात या च कि स्यु लोखर अपड़ि सक्या अपड़ौंयी थैं गिंडांण्म लगांणू च। मनिख बि अपड़ि सक्या मनिखी थैं कचम्वंणम् लगै दींद। तुम बि जु अपड़ि सक्या अपड़ौंयी थैं चटगांणम् लगै द्येल्या त सौब लोखरी जन टुटी नितंणा (कमजोर) हूंणा रैल्या। किरम्वळौं कि भयात अज्यूं तकै सांजिलि-मेसिलि (मिलजुल कर) कै रांद। बिस्रि बि तै लोखर अर मनिख जन नि हुंया।"
ज्वान किरम्वळौन् अपड़ा दादा खुटौंम् मुंड नवै द्या।
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 Kukhari Chor: Interesting Garhwali Language story
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      Kukhari Chor means the hen thief.  There has been regular theft of chicken eggs from  Gatti Bwada house. Gatti tries for finding out the theif and failed to do so. There was waiting anew shock for Gatti. Thief stole his hen too. Now, Gatti was in deep trouble. Gatti goes to future teller. Future teller offered him a couple of non satisfactory reasons and remedies. Gatti caught the thief and it was shock for his life and shock for his wife and shock for readers too.
  The story is interesting from the beginning till end.
The words, phrases and dialogues are as per characters and situation. Garhwali literature creative and critics as Virendra Panwar and Vimal Negi appreciate Mahesha Nand for using Garhwali words those are lost because of Neo-Brahminical period (Modern education).
 Mahesha Nand narrated the story in such style that readers read the story till end.
    This author appreciates efforts by Mahesha Nand in storytelling style and using those words which are less in use but were very much in use fifty years back.
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Reference – ‘Augar’ a Story collection by Mahesha Nnand page 28..
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 Kukhari Chor: Interesting Garhwali Language story
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   Critical Review for Garhwali Short Stories written by Mahesha Nand-5
  Literature Historian: @ Bhishma Kukreti
      Kukhari Chor means the hen thief.  There has been regular theft of chicken eggs from  Gatti Bwada house. Gatti tries for finding out the theif and failed to do so. There was waiting anew shock for Gatti. Thief stole his hen too. Now, Gatti was in deep trouble. Gatti goes to future teller. Future teller offered him a couple of non satisfactory reasons and remedies. Gatti caught the thief and it was shock for his life and shock for his wife and shock for readers too.
  The story is interesting from the beginning till end.
The words, phrases and dialogues are as per characters and situation. Garhwali literature creative and critics as Virendra Panwar and Vimal Negi appreciate Mahesha Nand for using Garhwali words those are lost because of Neo-Brahminical period (Modern education).
 Mahesha Nand narrated the story in such style that readers read the story till end.
    This author appreciates efforts by Mahesha Nand in storytelling style and using those words which are less in use but were very much in use fifty years back.
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Reference – ‘Augar’ a Story collection by Mahesha Nnand page 28..
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    Garhwali Story
         गौं कि भयात
Garhwali Story by: Mahesha Nand
झ्यंतु कौं कS छा भरि गरीब। बसग्याळम् झौड़ पुड़्यां छा। झ्यूंतु कौं कु कूढ़ू उजंण्यां हुंयू छौ। गिड़कतळ्यूम् कूढ़ू खळ्क उजड़ि ग्या। पांडि त उजड़ी च, उबरि बि गारा-माटन् तंणसट ह्वे ग्या। तौंकु मुक ढकांणौ टपट्याट पोड़ि ग्या।
गौं कS पदान जी छा भला मनिख। वु झ्यूंतु कौं कS कूढ़ा दिखंणू ऐनि। झ्यूंतु अर वे कि घरौंळ बरखै कि झुंमणाटम् ढुंग्गा-माटु छंट्यांणा। नौना वूं कS अपड़ा ब्वाडा उबरा चुल्ला फर बैठ्यां छा। पदान जी थैं कळकळि लगि ग्या। वून धाद मरा अर सौब गंवड़्या थौड़म् निड़्ये ग्येनि। पदान जीन् सब्यूम् मनिख्यात बिंगै कि बोलि-- "भा रै, भयात निबा। झ्यूंतु ब्यट्टौ घोल चिंण्णौ क्वी उयार कैरा। वेकS बाळा-गुफळा उजड़्यां घोला पंछी जन डबड्यांणा छन।"
"मै मा बि एक उबरि पांडि च। जु वूं थैं उबरु दींदु त हम पकांदै बि कक्ख छां। वेकि बि नौनौं कि घिमसांण (बहुसंख्या) च अर म्यरि बि। भुलै ब्वारि दग्ड़ि जिठंणौ कS खिचरोड़ जूदा छन।" झ्यूंता भैन् अपड़ि गड़दस लगा।
"इन कैरा कि, जबSरि तकै झ्यूंतू कूढ़ु चिंणेंदु तबSरि तकै वु हमSरा उबरा रै ल्याला। मि अपड़ु रुसSड़ु पांडा ल्ही जांदु।" दरमानसिंगन् बोलि।
"कूढ़ू क्यान चिंणाण वेन, दाँत तोड़ीकी ? ब्यखुन्यू सागौ खुंणै आलंण तकै नी वेकS ड्यार।" मैपालन् झ्यूंत्वा चुल्लै सकळि लगा।
पदान जीन् अपड़ि पदनचरिम् बोलि दे -- "भयूं जबSरि तकै वे कु कूढ़ू चिंणेंदु तबSरि तकै कि रासन-पांणि मि पुकै द्यूलु। तुम ब्वाला, कु क्य सहेल द्ये सक्द।"
कैन बोलि ध्वै-माटु मि द्यूलु, कैन ढुंग्गा-माटौ सरान् ओगि, कैन द्वार-पट्यला-कुर्रा दींणू बोलि त कैन फटSळा दींणू तांण मारि। मिस्त्र्यूंन् बि गौं कि भयातम् मोंण रुप्याS। वून चिंणैयी ओगंण छै। सर्रा गौं कि मनिख्यात अर भयात झ्यूंता कूढ़ा चिंण्ण फर मिस्ये ग्या। दस दिन बि नि ह्वे छा कि उबरि-पांडि टकटकि ह्वे ग्या। गौं कि भयातन् अपड़ु खैकि झ्यूंत्वी कूढ़ि ठड्ये द्या। झ्यूंतु अपड़ा ड्यार ऐ ग्या।
Copyright @ Mahesha Nand , 2016

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        Gail Bald: Garhwali Story about deceptive way of selling (Galadari)
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      Gail-Bald (the lazy bull) is the story about Galadar (live stock trader) selling live stock by deceptive methods. In villages, there are live stock traders those sell the domestic animals by tricks and buyers get unwanted or undesired animal that might be a cow, buffalo or bull pair.
      The story is an unreliable seller sells his lazy bull pair to Puranu. Now, the story tells the bad fate of Puranu.  The story is interesting in telling the pain for Puranu and the question is for readers about the way Puaranu sells those bulls.
   The story is from Garhwali society and happens on daily basis. Mahesha Nand uses proverbs and phrases as ‘Bhappi- Suppi’, ‘Thamthayt’, Dam Dharan’ for making the story interesting and speeding the story.
 The story teller uses descriptive and dialogues for forwarding the story. Phrases as ‘ Baldun Thamthyat ar Ghandyun Chhamchhyat’ offer pleasure for readers.
The dialogues and description fit to story characters. Even Mahesha describes the practical strategies used by Galadars as concealing and falsifying .
 Those experienced the Galadari of unreliable traders would state that the story is real and they are witnesses for many such true events.  The story is interesting to read.

Copyright@ Bhishma Kukreti, Mumbai, 2016
Reference – ‘Augar’ a Story collection by Mahesha Nnand page 84-88
Critical Review of Garhwali Short story by Mahesha Nand to be continued in -7
Critical Review of Modern Garhwali Short Stories to be continued…169
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गढवाली कथाएं , गढवाल  से कथाएं , आधुनिक गढ़वाली  कहानियां , हिमालयी कहानियां 
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