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फेसबुक फर लाइक अर कमेंट
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Satirical Story By Mahesha Nand
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Internet Presentation and Interpretation by Bhishma Kukreti
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रघ्घु दा चौका तिर्वळि ऐ कि गौळु चिरफाड़ी म्यौळंणि घन्नू छौ। गंवड़्या भरि दलगरेंणा(परेसान हूणा) छा वे कS रूंण स्ये। क्वी ब्वन्नु-- "हे वेन रूंण नी त हैंसण च ! वे कु बुबा मुर्यूं च।"
"हे भै, तुम ब्वन्ना त सै बात छंवा पंण सौंण मोरि सासू अर भादौ ऐनि आंसु। मुंड मुंड्ये ग्येनी, तेल खये ग्या, पितरकुड़ु थरप्ये ग्या अर मैना मनSये ग्या त अब म्यौळंणि घन क्यापंणि नि लगंणू च तुम थैं। फूका, वे थैं थामर (सहारा) दींणू वे कS मुक फर एक दां फेर चला।"
सर्रा गौं कS जजड़ाट कै वे कs ड्यारम् ऐ ग्येनि। मंगंणा ब्वाडन् वे कि पीट मलासी बोलि-- "ब्यट्टा! टीग (कमर) मसकांण। कै कs बुबा नि रैनि यीं मुंथम्। सौब आंदा छन अर जांदा छन।"
"ब्वाडा जी, मि जंण्दु छौं।" रघ्घुन् अपड़ु नाक, आंखा अर गिच्चु फूंजी बोलि-- "मै थैं एक मैना ह्वे ग्या, मिन अंमणि फेस बुक खोलि त म्यारा बुबा जी का मुन मा ३०० लुक्खुन् लाइक मारी।" रघ्घु फेर रूंण बैठि ग्या। वेन धौसिनकै बोलि --"जौं लुक्खुन म्यारा बाबै मिरत्यु थैं लाइक कैरि वु म्यारा बैरि छन। खुस ह्वे ग्येनि कि मोरि गि खिम्मा खंणत्वाळ।"
"च्वाबै! त्यारा बुबै मुनै खबर-सार फेसबुक फर कैन सरा ?"
"म्यारा ममा फड़क्वाळ जीन।"
"हेप्डी ब्वे का ! फेसबुका दगड़्यौन् फड़क्वाळ जी कु नौ अर फोटु द्येखि अर फकाफक लाइक मारि द्येनि। फड़क्वाळ जी त भरि फेमस छन फेसबुक मा।" गग्गुन् फेसबुकै सकळि(सच्चै) बिंगा।
"थ्व! कमेंट बि त पौड़ा ज्यां कS सदमा मा रघ्घु भै जिकुड़ु फुंण्णु च।"
रघ्घुन् बोलि-- "कमेंट त् मिन अज्यूं तकै पौढ़ी नि छन।" रघ्घुन कमेंट ओपन कैरि त वु हौर भक्वरा-भकोर कै रूंण बैठि ग्या। फड़क्वाळ जी कु रघ्वा बुबा मुन मा पैलि वूं कि फोटु डळीं अर तौळ बटि ल्यख्यूं छौ-- "म्यारा जीजा जी, सोरग ह्वे ग्येनि।" कमेंट अंया--
"खंणत्वाळ जी! मज्जा मा हैं ?"
"खंणत्वाळ जी, आप जियो हजारों साल।"
"वाह फड़क्वाळ जी! क्या अच्छी खबर दी।"
"गजब फड़क्वाळ जी, दिल खुश कर दिया।"
"आप बहुत अच्छी गडवाली लिखते हैं। लगे रहो फड़क्वाळ जी।"
"सुन्दर कविता फड़क्वाळ जी।"
"गजब फड़क्वाळ जी।"
"छा गये फड़क्वाळ जी।"
"खंणत्वाळ जी अर फड़क्वाळ जी आप हमारा मार्ग-दर्शक छंवा।"
जै कS बिंगण्म ऐ हो, वेन मामला बींगी अर कमेंट कैरि "ओम् शांति ओम्"
हैंकु हौर तुर्रम्म खां वु ल्यखंणू "ओम शांति ओम अच्छी फिल्म है।"


Copyright@ Mahesha Nand , Kivars , Paidalsyun, Pauri Garhwal
 

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 Danyasti: A Sad Story illustrating children disregarding parents 
Critical Review of Modern Garhwali Short Stories -165
    Analysis of Garhwali short story ‘Bargat’
   Critical Review for Garhwali Short Stories written by Mahesha Nand-3
     
                           Review by Bhishma Kukreti

        Danyasti short story by Mahesha Nand is not a new story in Garhwali story world. Past story creators published many stories in Modern Garhwali literature about children ignoring parents in villages or sending back their parents to villages or orphan houses.
 The subject is not new, the plot is also not exclusive and the social conditions are also not new in Danyasti story by Mahesha.
         The present story is important from the point of view of presentation and new phrases used by Mahesha Nand. His phrases in the present story make the story important for Garhwali fiction world.
     Mahesha uses analogies for speeding the story.     
उपरी पंछी तरां टपराणु छौ .
फूलीं मुंडली घांडी सि  लाळ जन डगड्याणि छै  .
धौम्पा कुंलैं कि सि डाली घळकि
   Mahesha Nand is master in using pair words usually used in oral communication in Garhwal and Mahesha uses them as his domesticated slaves. Kathait appreciated his uses of pair words too.
चैल-पैलम , रक्च्वड़ा-रकचोड, अबलाट-छबल़ाट
Mahesha uses words those are not used by educated Garhwali even in Garhwal. Garhwalis should thank Mahesha for making them in uses as
कळयूर, कमताण, रैसान, गासी  .
 Readers would enjoy the sad story as Mahesha is successful in creating pathos.
Copyright@ Bhishma Kukreti 24/8/2016
Refrence – Augar a Story collection by Mahesha Nnand page 14-20
Critical Review of Garhwali Short story by Mahesha Nand to be continued in -4
Critical Review of Modern Garhwali Short Stories to be continued…166
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Let Us Celebrate Hundred and Third Year of Modern Garhwali   Stories!

 Modern Garhwali Story
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          किरम्वळौं कि भयात
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Story by: Mahesha Nand
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बिंड्डि कै किरम्वळा अपड़ा झिंट्टा-बुकळा लेकि अपड़ा ड्यार छा जांणा। कै मा नाजा भारा त कै मा लखड़्वा गड्वळा छा। हिटद-हिटद सि ऐ ग्येनि एक चौड़ा-चकळा बाठा मा। बाठम् द्वी मनिख लोखरा डिंगुला छा कटंणा। किरम्वळौं कS पदानन् बोलि--- "यूं मनिख्यूं कु बाठु अड्यूं च। न हो कै फर चोट-फटाग लग, पैलि यूं थै जांण द्या। घड़ेक थौ बिसा, पाछ जौला ऐथर।"
सौब किरम्वळा बाठा छोड़ थौ खांण बैठि ग्येनि। एक दानु किरम्वळु मनिख्यूं थै टक्क लगै कि दिखंणू छौ। वेन ज्वान किरम्वळौं थैं अढ़ांद बोलि-- "द्येखा रै छ्वारौं,सि मनिख लोखरा सिनसन् (चिमटा) लोखरा छींणा थै अड्येकि अर तब वे कS बरमंड मा लोखरा कै घैंणन् टमाक मारी लोखरी थैं तड़क्क-तड़क्क तुंण फर लग्यांन्। ग्याड़ु (मूरख) लोखर चड़क्क-चड़क्क टुटंण फर लग्यूं च। ब्वाला, क्य बिंग्यां ?"
"नि बिंग्यां दादा जी, तुमी बिंगा।" ज्वान किरम्वळा दंदोळम् पोड़ि ग्येनि।
"टक्क लगै कि बींगा। जु सि मनिख सूनौ छींणू, सूनौ क्वी घैंण अर सूनौ क्वी सिनसु बणै कि लोखर थैं तुंण चाला त लोखर सप्पा नि टुटंण्या। सूनु चा कतगै मैंगु किलै न धौं, वे फर इतगा सक्या(ताकत) नी कि वु लोखर थैं चड़कै साक। बिंगणै बात या च कि स्यु लोखर अपड़ि सक्या अपड़ौंयी थैं गिंडांण्म लगांणू च। मनिख बि अपड़ि सक्या मनिखी थैं कचम्वंणम् लगै दींद। तुम बि जु अपड़ि सक्या अपड़ौंयी थैं चटगांणम् लगै द्येल्या त सौब लोखरी जन टुटी नितंणा (कमजोर) हूंणा रैल्या। किरम्वळौं कि भयात अज्यूं तकै सांजिलि-मेसिलि (मिलजुल कर) कै रांद। बिस्रि बि तै लोखर अर मनिख जन नि हुंया।"
ज्वान किरम्वळौन् अपड़ा दादा खुटौंम् मुंड नवै द्या।
Copyright@ Mahesha Nand
Modern Garhwali Story from Pauri Garhwal; Modern Garhwali Story from Rudraprayag Garhwal; Modern Garhwali Story from Chamoli Garhwal; Modern Garhwali Story from  Tehri Garhwal; Modern Garhwali Story from  Uttarkashi Garhwal; Modern Garhwali Story from  Dehradun Garhwal; Modern Garhwali Story from  Haridwar, Garhwal;
 
 
 


 

 Kukhari Chor: Interesting Garhwali Language story
Critical Review of Modern Garhwali Short Stories -167
    Analysis of Garhwali short story ‘’
   Critical Review for Garhwali Short Stories written by Mahesha Nand-5
  Literature Historian: @ Bhishma Kukreti
      Kukhari Chor means the hen thief.  There has been regular theft of chicken eggs from  Gatti Bwada house. Gatti tries for finding out the theif and failed to do so. There was waiting anew shock for Gatti. Thief stole his hen too. Now, Gatti was in deep trouble. Gatti goes to future teller. Future teller offered him a couple of non satisfactory reasons and remedies. Gatti caught the thief and it was shock for his life and shock for his wife and shock for readers too.
  The story is interesting from the beginning till end.
The words, phrases and dialogues are as per characters and situation. Garhwali literature creative and critics as Virendra Panwar and Vimal Negi appreciate Mahesha Nand for using Garhwali words those are lost because of Neo-Brahminical period (Modern education).
 Mahesha Nand narrated the story in such style that readers read the story till end.
    This author appreciates efforts by Mahesha Nand in storytelling style and using those words which are less in use but were very much in use fifty years back.
Copyright@ Bhishma Kukreti, Mumbai, 2016
http://www.merapahadforum.com/uttarakhand-language-books-literature-and-words/exclusive-garhwali-language-stories-!/new/#new
Reference – ‘Augar’ a Story collection by Mahesha Nnand page 28..
Critical Review of Garhwali Short story by Mahesha Nand to be continued in -6
Critical Review of Modern Garhwali Short Stories to be continued…168
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आधुनिक  गढ़वाली  कथाएं , गढ़वाल से गढ़वाली कथा , ऊताराखंड की आधुनिक  गढ़वाली  कथाएं; हिमालय की आधुनिक  गढ़वाली  कथाएं; उत्तर भारत की आधुनिक  गढ़वाली  कथाएं; दक्षिण एशिया की आधुनिक  गढ़वाली  कथाएं; एशिया की आधुनिक  गढ़वाली  कथाएं;


Let Us Celebrate Hundred and Third Year of Modern Garhwali   Stories!

        Gail Bald: Garhwali Story about deceptive way of selling (Galadari)
Critical Review of Modern Garhwali Short Stories -168
    Analysis of Garhwali short story ‘’
   Critical Review for Garhwali Short Stories written by Mahesha Nand-6
  Literature Historian: @ Bhishma Kukreti
      Gail-Bald (the lazy bull) is the story about Galadar (live stock trader) selling live stock by deceptive methods. In villages, there are live stock traders those sell the domestic animals by tricks and buyers get unwanted or undesired animal that might be a cow, buffalo or bull pair.
      The story is an unreliable seller sells his lazy bull pair to Puranu. Now, the story tells the bad fate of Puranu.  The story is interesting in telling the pain for Puranu and the question is for readers about the way Puaranu sells those bulls.
   The story is from Garhwali society and happens on daily basis. Mahesha Nand uses proverbs and phrases as ‘Bhappi- Suppi’, ‘Thamthayt’, Dam Dharan’ for making the story interesting and speeding the story.
 The story teller uses descriptive and dialogues for forwarding the story. Phrases as ‘ Baldun Thamthyat ar Ghandyun Chhamchhyat’ offer pleasure for readers.
The dialogues and description fit to story characters. Even Mahesha describes the practical strategies used by Galadars as concealing and falsifying .
 Those experienced the Galadari of unreliable traders would state that the story is real and they are witnesses for many such true events.  The story is interesting to read.

Copyright@ Bhishma Kukreti, Mumbai, 2016
Reference – ‘Augar’ a Story collection by Mahesha Nnand page 84-88
Critical Review of Garhwali Short story by Mahesha Nand to be continued in -7
Critical Review of Modern Garhwali Short Stories to be continued…169
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गढवाली कथाएं , गढवाल  से कथाएं , आधुनिक गढ़वाली  कहानियां , हिमालयी कहानियां 
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